No matter how sincere you are, a promise is still a promise and every company in the industry can make the same one. Don't waste users' precious time with "Marketese" and generic promises like this. Find the thing that makes you stand out in your industry and write that instead.
Now this is subtitle material! A subtitle should be 1-2 sentences long and expand on the content in the headline. The additional content helps users quickly decide if your site has what they need. If it does, then they might want to know about the number of employees or size of your facilities.
Easy side and rear loading and unloading access come standard in our line of multipurpose Flatbed models.
An innovative square-bottom design is used in every one of our Dump models for maximum stability and resistance to body twisting.
Our Moving Floor or Transfer models are designed to handle the heaviest volumes of bulk material in the most demanding conditions.
Lose the "Welcome" Statement
Users don't need to be told that they can "tour" your website. They know. That's why they're on your site. Nor do they need to know that your site was recently designed. General "Welcome" statements like these offer no value to your users. It's a waste of their reading time and dilutes the good headline already in the copy!
Chunkify!